Want a little
secret to turn your advertising into an irresistible
magnet for customers?
Dale Carnegie
knew the secret, and that’s one reason his book, How to Win
Friends and Influence People, has sold more than 15 million
copies. In fact,
British Airways recently named it, “The Business Book of the
20th Century.”
It’s a great
book. But if Dale
had titled it “How to Remember People’s Names and Curb Your
Incessant Urge to Argue,” do you think it would have sold as
well? Probably
not. There’s great
power in good titles.
What you may
not realize is the words “How to Win Friends and Influence
People” are not only the title of the book. Those words were also the
headline of a mail-order ad, which sold the book. The ad ran successfully for
many years and sold hundreds of thousands of copies.
So what does this have to do with turning
your advertising into an irresistible customer magnet?
Here’s what.
Behind the title and headline is a “secret code”
that makes it powerful.
Dale knew it.
Great advertising copywriters know it. And now, you’re going to
know it, too.
The “secret
code” is actually a generic formula that gets attention
and creates desire in your prospect’s mind. Every winning headline
has a unique generic formula hidden inside. Here’s the formula in Dale
Carnegie’s book title and headline:
How to
_____ and _____.
Let’s see the formula at work. Say you are an executive
recruiter, and you help companies find new executives. In reality, your biggest
problem is finding the executive candidates in the first
place. So, to
increase your group of candidates, you decide to run an ad in
your local business journal.
Here’s how you could use this formula to write a
headline for your ad:
…and right after
reading that headline, anyone who’s even a little interested
would want to read your ad immediately. Then, if your copy
(text) is even halfway decent, you’d get plenty of calls.
Or, let’s say you run a martial arts
school. Here’s how
you could apply the formula in an advertising headline to get you
new students:
Do you see how powerful that is? You’ve just zeroed-in on
people who are likely to be interested in learning martial arts.
The brutal reality of
advertising: An ad
with a good headline and even mediocre copy will
get you a response and generate sales. But with a poor headline,
even the most brilliant copy will get you little or no
response. Why?
Because without a
good headline to get their attention, most people won’t read any
further.
The good news
is, once you have identified a good headline that works in one
industry or market, you can adapt it (like we did with the Dale
Carnegie headline, above) for your own business. Great headlines work as
subject lines in emails, titles on Web pages, and of course as
headlines in print ads and sales letters. Great headlines will
literally transform your sales.
How does this
work in today’s economy?
Recently a
client asked me to help him introduce a new service to Internet
Service Providers.
(Note: To understand what you are about to read, you
should know that ISPs call their suppliers “backbone
providers.”) I wrote a
direct mail letter and my client sent it out to ISPs. Because my client was
revealing new information his prospects hadn’t heard before, we
used the following “teaser headline” on the front of the envelope:
Was this an entirely original headline? No. I had seen a similar
“teaser headline” on a successful mailing to promote an
investment newsletter:
So I merely identified the “secret code” in
the original winning headline, and applied it to my client’s
market, ISPs.
The response
to the mailing was overwhelming! Nearly 10% of the entire
ISP industry responded to our letter – and my client has added
eight figures of new annual revenues as a result of the
business that developed.
I’m telling you
this not to brag, but to point out the awesome power of good
headlines. While
many people spend hours and hours trying to come up with “the
perfect headline” for their ads, there is an easier way. Find proven headlines that
already work for another business in another industry, and adapt
them to your business.
David Garfinkel has been
described as “the world’s greatest copywriting coach.” He’s a successful
results-oriented copywriter and the author of “Advertising
Headlines That Make You Rich,” which shows you how
proven
money-making headlines customized for your
business can increase your profits by
1700%.
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